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FYI, forwarding the mail from Ms. Fenner re: Yolanda's Genius challenge. ---------- From: "Carol Fenner Williams" <fenwms@iserv.net> To: Barbara McElfish <3mcelfish@integrityol.com> Subject: Re: Yolanda's Genius Date: Sun, Jun 13, 1999, 9:47 AM Dear Ms. McElfish - (is it a Scot name?) I'm glad the challenge was dealt with so handily. Yes, I would love to see the responses from your colleagues on the net. I found out about the challenge from my publishers - the assistant editor, Karen Riskin, at Simon & Schuster who sounded terribly woebegone and regretful about it. I told her Yolonda could handle anything and not to worry and that if Yolonda's Genius were never challenged I'd worry that I'd written a tepid book. I am fortunate to have Margaret McEdlerry as an editor. Only rarely is she influenced by the hounds of stricture. I can count the times on half a foot that I have had to defend any important part of my work to her. And she is always responsive to reason. Yolonda's Genius keeps good company with a number of other challenged books, some of which I, myself, don't like. Maya Angelou's I know Why the Caged Bird Sings, Judy Blume's Forever, Lois Lowry's The Giver, Phyllis Reynolds Naylor's All But Alice, Katherine Paterson's The Bridge to Terabithia and The Great Gilly Hopkins, Mildred Taylor's The Friendship, and Paul Zindel's Loch. Even some of R.L. Stine's Nancy Drewish horror stories have earned a place on the ALA's list of the most challenged books of 1998, something Yolonda has yet to achieve. I was planning on responding to specific complaints if you had any, but since everything has been resolved, I am emailing you below an excerpt from a letter I sent to a teacher who was short of rude in her disapproval of Yolonda's Genius. She included a letter from one of her students which was very rude indeed. The excerpt follows: You objected to pages 34 through 37. My stories come to me in a series of visions. One of the visions I had during the writing of Yolonda's Genius was of Yolonda looking up genius in the public library. I saw her clear as day - her big body before the dictionary stand which supported a book of imperious size, her plump fingers turning the thin, gold-edged pages. To verify the experience, I had to try it myself - look up genius.. And I came across the other words Yolonda would find en route to the word she was looking for. Genitalia. Genitor. I didn't invent them as a prelude to finding genius. They were there in the American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language, causing me to investigate the reaction of a girl like Yolonda. These are words which would catch the intelligent, inquisitive eye of any bright, quick, vital girl. Yolonda loves dictionaries - loves all books This is an important part of her character. Ye Gods, woman, would you have the compilers of dictionaries leave out scientific words like genitalia to placate your misplaced sense of decency? . . . . . . You certainly missed a grand opportunity to point out to your students that genitalia and sex organ are scientific words used by the medical profession - that they are not funny words or sexy words or dirty words or cuss words. People should be able to use them without blushing or smirking or guilt. They are good useful words. Page 35: You are probably referring to Yolonda reading sexy adult books until her own breathing embarrasses her. I'm sorry if this offended you (and therefore at least one of your students), but I think this is part of the normal kid experience. This line could have been left out without affecting the story. A lot of true things could have been left out - Aunt Tiny (she offended a lot of dieters), Grant Park (many people are put off by un-patrolled dangers of big city public parks), the unsympathetic reading teacher (teachers who resemble Miss Gilluly resent her role as 'bad guy'), Vic Watts's stutter, the white "druggie" girl with the washboard music. It would have resulted in less texture and flesh in the story - less honesty of observation. Yolonda reading the sexy parts of adult books is a true kind of thing. I did not find it offensive; my highly responsible, internationally respected editor wasn't offended. The copy-editor wasn't offended, nor were the thousands upon thousands of readers who love the book, nor was the Newbery committee. I'm afraid, despite your community insulation, you are in the minority with this view. I did not write in this part after the book received a Newbery Honor. Now as to the rest of page 35 and pages 36 and 37, I am mystified as to what you find objectionable. Absolutely mystified. These pages are valuable to the story. They lead the reader, as well as Yolonda, to the discovery of Andrew's gifts. John Hersey's comment that "true genius rearranges old things in a way never seen before" is essential to the comprehension of what a genius does and is - both for Yolonda and the reader. It is part of the backbone of the book. Yolonda, who is smarter and better informed than most of her teachers, might also rankle a lot of educators. To your credit, her true smartness and boldness did not upset you. Yolonda, herself, is a kind of genius and you seemed perfectly content to acknowledge that there are some children with this intelligence and confidence. Your comment: "Today's children are faced with things everyday on ads, television, and in movies." What "things" are you talking about? Do you mean violence and sex overkill - the exaggerated graphic explicitness of both violence and sex? I certainly agree. I am not only disapproving of it; it bores me to death. When it is misplaced, displaced and out of context, when it is done merely to titillate and not for the sake of clarity, violence and graphic sex are essentially boring. I always turn off the set. And I see absolutely no resemblance to these "things" of yours in my pages 34 - 37. Too bad you wouldn't "dignify it with repetition". Then I might have a clue to what is actually bothering you - and you, in the process, might have a clue, too. I do not write passages to excite prurience in children. I try to write honest, thought provoking adventures. I will not back off from reality to present readers with a candy world full of dull kids who behave themselves according to a rigidly acceptable pattern (any kid that does is on the low rung of survival). Neither will I emasculate my text by catering to those whose acumen is corrupted by fear or shame, or stunted through lack of real life experience. Therefore, I think, perhaps, my books are not for you. I suggest, in the future, you steer clear of them. It will save us both a lot of grief. Ms. McElfish, I don't know if this will be helpful in any future challenges. I am disgusted with attempts to censor books in schools and libraries. That is the job of a parent - to guide their children through a maze of information. When I was a child, there were certain books forbidden in our house. Comic books was one type and Nancy Drew was the other. My father considered them both trash - and indeed they both are - in depth of content, in imagination and in most all cases, in the writing. I don't think my father was right in forbidding them however. We smuggled them in - or read them at friends' houses. My aunt Phyllis Fenner, a great and well known librarian and authority on children's books, disagreed with my father. Nothing is wrong with trash if one is also provided with good literature, too, as a gratifying part of their life. Children will eventually make the choices their parents have trained them to make, unless they discover through overwhelming evidence, that their parents are wrong. People who must remove books from the shelves of children's libraries are essentially afraid that their 'case' isn't strong enough to withstand the onslaught of information from the rest of the world. My, how I do go on. I hope some parts of my harangue will prove useful to you. You may have to wait until summer to read this email. Sending you my best wishes in the love of good books, I remain Carol Fenner ---------- >From: "Barbara McElfish" <3mcelfish@integrityol.com> >To: fenwms@iserv.net >Subject: Yolanda's Genius >Date: Mon, Jun 7, 1999, 11:48 PM > > Dear Ms. Fenner, > > What a delight to hear from you, personally! Even though the challenge has ended > and the recommendation was to leave Yolanda's Genius on the shelves, I would > still would be interested in your email. We all need to know how to handle > challenges, and I agree that the best way is to read the book cover to cover. > We've had a rather challenging ending for our school year, but I plan to read > Yolanda's Genius this summer to get the full impact of the story. I did read > Randall's Wall aloud to my daughter after reading a rave review on our LM_NET. > > I want you to know that I got several responses from my colleagues on the net > ...all in favor...I could send you some of those if you are interested. I was > the "fact finder", but not part of the challenge. > > How did you hear about this? Are you a part of our listserv? > Looking forward to your response, > Barbara (and yes, you may use my name!) > > =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-==-= All postings to LM_NET are protected under copyright law. To quit LM_NET (or set-reset NOMAIL or DIGEST), send email to: listserv@listserv.syr.edu In the message write EITHER: 1) SIGNOFF LM_NET 2) SET LM_NET NOMAIL or 3) SET LM_NET DIGEST 3) SET LM_NET MAIL * Please allow for confirmation from Listserv For LM_NET Help & Archives see: http://ericir.syr.edu/lm_net/ =-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-=--=-=-=